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Re: Break the bolts
Yes, I can. How it will be better for you: with ICQ or private message?
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: Break the bolts
Hmm... Hawkie, thank you for your words about the grammar. Our teacher at school is not very good and that's why I should learn english grammar not only at school. ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: It is ten of evening on the city clock
Thank you! :) I use acoustic guitar for singing this song.
May 29, 2009 -
Re: Lost in the precipice.
Thank you! The end of this story is not so bad as it seems. :) The song has allegoric meaning. It's song about the person, who goes by wrong way. ...
May 23, 2009 -
Re: Blood Fire
I read the second poem you wrote and I can say, that you don't belong to average people. I like, how you share feelings of lyrical character with images of ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: It is ten of evening on the city clock
Thank you for critique. It is my first song, translated from russian into english, that's why rhyme is not very good. :)
May 17, 2009 -
Re: I'm Stronger
I think, that this poem is support for person, who feels pain in the soul. Poem help readers to feel feelings of lyrical character.
May 6, 2009 -
Re: Malevolence.
I think, that beginning is good. You described all around main charecter :wink:
May 6, 2009